Hey guys! So I want to get an opinion from y'all. Do you think that my fanfic is too long? I mean this is chapter 17 and I know very few people who go past 20 chapters but do you like that it's long? I don't really know how to end it so I think it'll be much longer. Does it bother you? Do you like it? Most fanfics don't go past like 5 parts but I don't know, I can't just end it. Please comment and let me know. Ps this chapter is kinda boring but whatever. Remember, I love y'all! Enjoy!
Hannah's Pov
I wake up to hear someone opening the front door.
I figure that it's Mamrie.
I look over and see Grace is still asleep.
I walk out into the living room and sure enough, Mamrie is sitting on the couch.
"Hey Mames! Sorry for leaving you last night." I apologize.
"Oh hey Hannah! And oh don't worry about it, I had a great night with Jason." She winks.
"Ooohh are y'all a thing now or was it a one time thing?" I ask.
"Well we're going out on a date tonight so I guess we're a thing....? I don't know." She says.
Grace walks out of her bedroom.
She's still sleepy and she rubs her eyes.
"Hey baby girl, how'd you sleep?" I ask.
"Good. So I overheard that you and Jason are dating now?" She asks Mamrie.
"I mean we're going on a date but I don't know. I guess so, I really like him." Mamrie says.
"Good. He seems like a nice guy. I'm happy for you." Grace says.
"Who wants breakfast?" Grace asks.
"Me!" Mamrie and I shout.
Grace gets up and starts making breakfast.
Shit. I forgot about the whole twitter thing.
I'm not gonna mention it until Grace brings it up.
I know it upsets her.
