Mary Ellen Campbell, you are an amazing woman. I read a couple of things that you have written and I know that you have been through a lot. I could only choose one story to review. So, I chose this one. Here's to you:
Title: The Start Of Summer - Simple title, straight to the point. The reader knows what to expect.
9/10
Genre: Short Story/Non-Fiction
Blurb: It didn't have one, but it really didn't need one in my opinion. You know what to expect as soon as you click on it.
Cover: Good work on the cover whomever made it. Kudos. It's absolutely perfect. Sums up the story beautifully.
10/10
PLOT
This is a story about her summers as a little girl. It made me remember my times as a little girl in the summer as well. I could practically feel the sun on my face and the wind in my hair while reading.
10/10
GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION
I really didn't notice anything that detracted me from the story whatsoever. It was well thought out and written.
10/10
OVERALL IMPRESSION
I really liked it. As I said above, she reminded me of my times as a little girl. Her writing style is very poetic and whimsical. I love it. Please give it a read when you get the chance. You won't regret it. She's fantastic! Really, she's a breath of fresh air!
10/10
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