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Divided - Prologue by @Somnomnom

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Title: Divided - Simplistic title. Is it too simplistic? Maybe it needs a subtitle as well to set it apart. There may be other books out there with the same name. It's hard to tell with just a prologue, but I will have to revisit when there's more :)

9/10

Genre: Fantasy

Blurb: I think that this needs a little bit of reworking. I get what you were trying to say, but some of the sentences (especially the first one) were a little long winded. The prologue itself was much better written than the blurb. It still intrigues me, but I know it's not your best work. 

8/10

Cover: The cover is a little too simple. It tells me nothing about the story. Doesn't really grab my attention.

7/10

CHARACTERS:

For a prologue, I feel like there was almost too many people introduced at once. I am sure your chapters will introduce them in greater detail. With so many characters at once, I had a hard time keeping track of what was going on exactly. On the other hand, I really like your characters so far.

9/10

PLOT

The plot sounds pretty good and has an original twist on the war of the different races. I really can't wait to read more. It's hard to judge based on just a prologue haha

10/10

GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION

I really didn't see anything noticeable.

10/10

OVERALL IMPRESSION

I like what I've read so far. Can't wait to read more. Give it a read through yourself. The author is very talented. I love what they've come up with! Very intriguing.

10/10

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