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The Influencers by @somnomnom

This story had me cracking up. Hilarious. Seriously.

Title: The Influencers - I like the title, but feel like it could be stronger somehow. At the same time, if you've read the story, you understand why this is the title :D  

7/10

Genre: Science Fiction/ Horror/ Humor

Blurb: The newly updated blurb is great! It draws me in much better than the previous one. You can tell the author has put a lot of work into it!

10/10

Cover: Hints at the world being in ruins, at something around the corner. Intriguing. 

9/10

CHARACTERS:

They were pretty believable, maybe just need some tweaking to seem a little more realistic. The dialogue was on point though! 

9/10

PLOT

Interesting plot. It kind of reminded me of the movie The Faculty. It was made in 1998 and was more horror than humor. This story, however, I thought was better. I found myself laughing a lot.      

9/10

GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION

There were a few spelling and grammar issues, but nothing major. Nothing that can't be fixed with further editing. The punctuation was pretty great, only a few minor things. Overall it was pretty good!    

7/10

OVERALL IMPRESSION

I thought this was hilarious. Although, there's only 4 chapters, it had me chuckling or smiling at pretty much every chapter. I love the author's sense of humor. I think that this story shows real promise! I'm really excited to keep reading it once there's more content. You roped me in and got yourself a reader! :D

I give it an 8/10!

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