Cute and fun. I really enjoyed this read! Good work!
Title: Magic In The Air - Love it!
10/10
Genre: Fanfiction
Blurb: Good, but needs a little editing to make it have more punch. It's off to a great start though!
8/10
Cover: I like it, but I feel like it could be a little better. The photo portion is what isn't doing it for me I think. The title and quote areas at the bottom are gold though.
8/10
CHARACTERS:
They are straight up delightful with a splash of whimsy. I loved them haha. The descriptors used for them were just awesome.
10/10
PLOT
I loved the plot! Great addition to anyone who loves Harry Potter. The plot wasn't unusually unique or anything, but it was really good!
10/10
GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION
There were a few grammar issues. Not so much with punctuation or spelling, those were just fine for the most part. Just needs a bit of tweaking and it will be perfection.
8/10
OVERALL IMPRESSION
Great read, talented and insightful writer. It was so much fun and I adored the characters as well as the plot. Must read!
10/10
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