So fun to read!
Title: The Offering - Perfect title for this story!
10/10
Genre: Vampires
Blurb: Fantastic. Well written. Makes me want to read more.
10/10
Cover: Love it. Reminds me a little of Twilight's cover with the apple, but I love the rose much better. It's simple and the red pops against the black and white setup.
10/10
CHARACTERS:
I really loved the characters. They were diverse, complex and well written. The dialogue between them was believable and gave me a sense of who they were. Well done!
10/10
PLOT
This plot really intrigued me. I don't want to give anything away though! It was a fresh new take on a vampire romance. I really liked the twists and turns throughout. Kept me reading.
9/10
GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION
There were a few grammar and spelling issues. One that I caught right away within the first two lines. Also, there were punctuation issues as well. I would just take another read through to catch any of those kinds of errors right away. It takes away from the story sometimes.
7/10
OVERALL IMPRESSION
Very well thought out. Even with the errors, it was still a really good read. The wording was wonderful. I really did enjoy it. Check it out for yourself and you'll see!
8/10
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