I personally love this book so far (I know I basically say this a lot, but there's not anything I've reviewed that I don't like so far). Read below to see why...
Title: Athazagoraphobia - I had to look it up before I realized that it's on the new cover :) It's the fear of being forgotten. It's original! LOVE IT.
10/10
Genre: Paranormal - I'm not sure if this is the right genre....but it's hard to peg this one into the right genre. They have powers, so paranormal makes sense.
Blurb: I think this blurb is AMAZING. Well executed. Written in a beautiful voice.
10/10
Cover: It's simple and unique. Although, if this is ever published (which it should be someday), I would love to see some of the characters on the cover of the book.
9/10
CHARACTERS:
There's not enough book yet for me to accurately judge the character development, but I really like them so far. They are all very believable and unique, according to the zodiac signs (if I'm getting that correctly?). I love that aspect of the characters.
9/10
PLOT
Very unique plot so far. I've never read anything like it. Characters are based on zodiac signs, which is just super cool to begin with. There's not enough book to exactly tell what the plot is, except that the main character, Aquarius, hides from his (evil) mother (may not be evil...but she's not a great person as far as i can tell, I hope that changes. You can tell she's got some mental illness or something going on) who hurts him. He is very lovable.
9/10
GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION
Some mistakes, but nothing too noticeable unless you're looking for it (which I was). Doesn't detract from story whatsoever. Can be fixed with further editing.
9/10
OVERALL IMPRESSION
This is a very well written, very well thought out book. It has mystery (the parts about Aquarius's mother), romance, supernatural/paranormal aspects (which are my favorites) and it's based in high school. So, you know that there's bound to be some crazy stuff happening. All in all, I can't wait to read more! You've got a new fan!
10/10
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