Mysterious and intriguing...
Title: Trapped - Simple, but captures your attention right away.
10/10
Genre: Vampire
Blurb: Good because it sparks intrigue, but could use some work to make it more powerful.
8/10
Cover: I like it, but I feel like it could be improved upon. It doesn't quite seem to match up with the title.
9/10
CHARACTERS:
I actually really loved the characters (even the bad guys). They were well written and felt 3D for me. I think the dialogue needs a bit of improving though, because at times the way they were talking didn't always come across as 100% realistic. It's nothing too bad though. It's almost there. I also feel like a bit more description is needed, especially with the characters. It's important for visualization.
9/10
PLOT
I was pulled in right away by the plot. It was mysterious and original enough that I wanted to keep reading. Kudos!
10/10
GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION
There were some errors with grammar and it lacked proper punctuation at times. Could use a tad more editing, but it's nothing too terrible. The spelling was on point though!
8/10
OVERALL IMPRESSION
It was a good read overall, even despite the minor things I found. The author has potential and talent. The story is good and with a bit more editing (perhaps with a beta reader) it will be superb. Please do check out this story!
9/10
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