A new take on a fanfiction about Harry Potter...
Title: Parallel Minds - Great title. Really makes you think.
10/10
Genre: Fanfiction
Blurb: Is off to a good start, I love the beginning, but it still needs a bit of brushing up.
7/10
Cover: The cover is a little too simple for my tastes. I think it could be done better. The pinkish background just doesn't suite the book very well.
8/10
CHARACTERS:
I really like the characters. I think they're well thought out and I love the addition of Julie and a few of the others. They're very believable.
9/10
PLOT
The plot was a unique take on Harry Potter that I hadn't come across before. I really enjoyed that.
10/10
GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION
It does need a little more editing, not so much in the spelling or punctuation department. Mostly it was grammar, but that's easily fixed. It does become a bit distracting at times, pulling the reader away from the story, but like I said it's a easy fix.
7/10
OVERALL IMPRESSION
I really did like this take on the book. It dealt with some abuse, a little magic, a tad bit of romance. I really did enjoy it. I think everyone should give it a chance. This author has a lot of storytelling talent. I truly believe that.
9/10
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