Dead Days by @it_bedonavan180

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Love it! Why? Look below!

Title: Dead Days - Kind of tells you what it's about, without giving it away. Good solid title.

10/10

Genre: Horror

Blurb: I think the blurb could use a bit more pizzaz, but it's off to a great beginning. It needs just a bit more added I think, something to pull people in.

8/10

Cover: Good cover, but it seems a little fuzzy or foggy. Maybe that's the look you're going for? Just needs a bit more clarity. Great start though!

8/10

CHARACTERS:

Fantastic characters. Great, clear, concise voice. It really lets you know so much about the main character. That's pretty much all I have to say about that :P

10/10

PLOT

Grotesque, but beautifully so. I loved it. I'm not usually much of a zombie/undead flesh eaters type of reader, but this one pulled me in.

10/10

GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION

Only spotted a couple very minor offenses.

9/10

OVERALL IMPRESSION

It's absolutely horrific in an absolutely amazing way! It is definitely something you should check out. The author has so much talent, it's clear and he does not waste it. This story was really great, check it out.

10/10

https://www.wattpad.com/user/it_bedonavan180

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