Wherefore Art Thou by @_sinnamon_roll_

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I had fun reading this and especially enjoyed the little author's notes and questions at the end of your chapters. Great idea. I may implement something similar into my future stories :)

Title: Wherefore Art Thou - Great! Let's you know it's connected to Shakespeare.

10/10

Genre: General Fiction (Not sure if this is the right genre, maybe fanfiction?)

Blurb: Perfect. Let's you know what it's about without all the excess nonsense.

10/10

Cover: It's beautiful. My only suggestion is to possibly consider changing the lettering. I feel like the coloring doesn't work because it kind of blends in with the rest of it. Also, making it a little bigger will help it stand out.

10/10

CHARACTERS:

They are straight up delightful with a splash of whimsy. I loved them haha. The descriptors used for them were just awesome. I love that there's the LGBTQ twist. I feel like there should be more stories out there. There's certainly not enough!

10/10

PLOT

Very unique! It's kind of a modernized fanfiction of Shakespeare's play. J'adore!

10/10

GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION

Needs a bit of editing as far as grammar and punctuation. The spelling was on point though!

8/10

OVERALL IMPRESSION

Wonderful read. It was entertaining and because I love Shakespeare so much, it kind of sucked me in. It does need some editing, but you already knew that. It's still a great job, well done! You are very imaginative.

9/10

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