I really enjoyed this story with the rich, unique characters and the dark, hopeless atmosphere that was painted.
Title: The Brothers of the Sword, The Waking Destiny - The title is a bit long, but it fits with the story. Kudos!
9/10
Genre: Fantasy
Blurb: Amazing! Well written. It definitely intrigued me and caught my attention.
10/10
Cover: Beautiful cover. It took me a minute to realize that it was hands, but once I did, I was even more impressed at the details.
10/10
CHARACTERS:
Complex and unique. I really loved the way they grew and developed over the course of the story. I would list favorite characters, but it was really hard to choose! They're all pretty great and richly defined.
10/10
PLOT
Extremely original plot. The concept was superb and it was well executed. I didn't notice any plot holes either, which is a plus. Good work!
10/10
GRAMMAR / SPELLING / PUNCTUATION
The only thing I really noticed, were a few run on sentences that needed some punctuation to break it up and the dialogue was lacking quote marks. The spelling and grammar, however, were practically perfect.
8/10
OVERALL IMPRESSION
The author's talent really pulled me in. Aside from a few errors listed above, it was an enjoyable read. I hope you love it as much as I do. Be sure to check out the author's works and give them a read! You won't be disappointed!
9/10
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