Bubblegum ➳ Remus Lupin

it's a mess.

lmao okay how should I begin.
This story is shit. It went downhill & I actually lost interest in writing it. At the beginning I was really enjoying what I was writing, but I feel as if I was speeding up the relationship between Remus and Violet. I feel as if I didn't develop the characters out fully and everything sort of seems rushed. I took a hiatus hoping to get my inspiration back but that was not the case.
Instead I wrote a chapter that honestly I had started months ago but never fully finished. And then one night I was like what the hell, let me go ahead and write something up and post it for the sake of just posting something. Yet, I didn't develop a storyline and I sort of ruined my story. As I read over it, I found some parts too cringy and felt the need to change it.
So that is exactly what I'm going to do. I'm going to rewrite some chapters and take a different approach. It might take a while, since I have yet to gain some inspiration, but I promise that it will happen. But I want your help.
You all are reading my story and I'm certain you all enjoyed it at the beginning, but there might have been a point where you felt I was going in a completely different direction and screwing up the story. So I'm asking if you all would please give me some constructive criticism and help me and you get a much better storyline.
And if you are enjoying the story so far (which I doubt) please do tell me what you feel I should add or remove.
I'm really trying here, but I cannot seem to figure out in what direction I want this story to go to. There are times when I want to keep it light and with a happy ending, and there are also other times where I want to make it dark and end with deaths.
But I have to be realistic here and either follow the Harry Potter timeline or completely end it a different way. So please do give me some advice and ideas on how to continue this story because I won't be able to do it alone.
I want you all to be able to enjoy reading my story, but I will need some inspiration before that can occur.

Okay my rant is over, thank you for listening. (Well, reading??)