Hey ladies and gentlemen, Astralheat0 is here and I recently posted something to my followers and if you aren't then allow me to explain.
I send a post saying that "Should i REMASTER Rouge will Rise?" And I just posted it before this part was even made.
Let me explain whu I should but it's up to you if you want me to.
Know first off we know that the storyline is good. It's not bad or great but good at least but the OCs and characters themselves.... Not so much.
I wanted to make my characters different than the others and here is how i planned them but never did it because I mainly focused on the storyline so i fucked up bad.
Ragna is someone that i want to be like me, he's laid back, lazy and really supportive to his friends and will always help and be there when they need him. Instead I kinda made him like Ruby in a way but not exactly in a perspective that you would see. Idk how to explain it but yea.
Julian was someone that I wanted to be different, weird, and really emotional cuz of what he is and is very insecure because of him being an Artifical Human Being. Instead I kinda made him into a ghost and we don't normally see him into my book until season 2 so... and not only that but he's really quiet.
Which leads me to Bero or Berodach.
Bero was suppose to be quiet, rude and very protective about his sister but instead I made him into Yang combined with an asshole with REAL anger issues. I'm serious about this. He's suppose to be the silent yet deadly character but instead he became into another loud ass Yang.
Btw I might run from her if she reads this.
Finally down into Viliana.
Viliana is suppose to be like Weiss in a way except she's not bitchy and very rude to others. She's suppose to be ambitious, very "chivalrous", and extremely polite except to her brother. And I did pull it off sorta but it really didn't work out in the end.
So that's all that I had to say. Remember this your opinion to decide if I should REMASTER Rouge will Rise.
Leave a comment and see ya.
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