This one isn't that bad, but still...
The author writes us the lyrics of the whole song.
I mean, we know the song if you just give us the title and artist. There is no need to repeat the chorus three times.
If you do find a song that fits the chapter, notify your readers in the beginning of the chapter. You can even add the song if you really want.
I just think it's unnecessary if you write the lyrics all down.
You're waisting precious words.
Rather a few lines that you think is important.
YOU ARE READING
I Think It's Too Cliche
RandomThis book is where I point out the things that I think is too cliche in books.
