From abnegation to dauntless (FATD) || ✓ Completed

Chapter 17

Tobias's POV (after she gives Tris her breakfast aka before gets kidnapped)
I walk out of our bedroom, and I walk through the apartment. Someone knocks in the door. I hear the shower running. I go open the door.Its probably just Zeke. I open the door and see no one. Wait what? I guess I was hearing things, although I'm not sure if that's any better. The door opens to the hallway, so I decide to check behind the door. Just as I look, something hits my head, and everything goes black.

Tris POV (after reads the note)
I crumble the paper inside my fist as tears stream down my face. Marcus. How could he do this. I run out of the apartment, and to the cafeteria. Chris sees me first. "Hey Tris, I love that nos- oh my God what's wrong?" she says noticing me crying. I open my mouth to say something, but end up crying even harder. Chris closes me in a hug, and I cry against her shoulder. "Sshh, it'll be alright" she assures me, eventhough she doesn't know what's going on. She's the best friend ever. When we break from the hug, I'm only sniffling. "Zeke, I need to get to the control room." I say turning to him. "Okay, but why?" He asks a confused expression on his face. I can't bring my self to answer so I just give him the paper. He reads his expression turns first in to shock, then anger. "Let's go." he says, his voice trembling a bit. "What's wrong?" Shauna asks, Lucas in her arms. Zeke hands her the note and everyone reads it. "Who's Tobias?" Chris asks. Oh rights, uups. I look at Zeke and give him a look that says 'can you?'. He just nods. "I'll explain on the way, Shauna, drop Lucas off at my moms. Meet us in the control room." Zeke says and Shauna nods. We all leave to the control room, my face stained with drying tears. Chris tries comfort me, and I appreciate her. Zeke starts explaining the truth about Tobias, and I just zone out, because I know all this. "Tris I'm so sorry!" Chris exclaims, now she knows my boyfriend is kiddnapped, I don't know if Zeke knows it was his sosiopath 'father'. By that time we've reached the the control room and I open the door wiping away my tears. "Hey Harrison!" Zeke says and goes straight to a computer. He presses the buttons on the keyboard and soon the image outside our apartment. He presses some more buttons, and soon I see Marcus knock on our door. "What's Marcus doing there?" Lynn asks. "He's Four's father, and the person who wrote that note." I say. I see Marcus hide behind the door as Tobias opens it. He looks around, obviously confused. He checks behind the door, and Marcus hits him in the head with a frying pan. Wait, where the f did he get that?! Tobias is knocked out, and Marcus starts dragging him somewhere. "I think I know where he takes him, lets go." I say. "Tris wait, shouldn't we plan this a bit?" Shauna asks. When did she get here? Okay, whatever. "You've read the note, for all we know, he could be dead!" I almost yell. "Tris, calm down." Chris says and places her hands on my shoulders. "I know you're worried, but we need some sort of a plan before we leave." she says looking me right in the eye. I know we do, but I have got to save him! "I know, I just, I can't lose him Christina!" I sob. She hugs me tighly and I clutch onto the back of her shrit, holding on for dear life. "I say we get guns and leave!" Lynn says. "I second that! I'm not gonna let my best mate die!" Zeke exclaims. "Okay, how about we all meet by the train tracks in half an hour?" Marlene suggsests. "Okay, see y'all in a bit" I say and I'm out of the door running to our apartment before anyone can say anything else.

  30 minutes later we all stand by the train tracks. I'm wearing all black, black long sleeved shirt, black knife pants and black combat boots. I have a gun in the waistband of my pants and about 20 knifes in my knife pants and 5 more in my waistband. I also have one in my boot. "Lets go save Four!" Uriah yells and we jump to the train as it passes by. Tobias I'm coming for ya.

   Tobias's POV

I wake up in a dark room. My head throbs in pain. I touch my temple and my fingers turn red, signaling there's blood. Well, found why it hurts. Why am I here? Is Tris okay? Who brought me here? The last question is answered when the door opens, revealing the devil himself. Marcus. "Aah, I see you've woken up! How do you feel Tobias?" he asks. "Been better, like five seconds before, when you weren't here." I reply sarcastically. "Why am I here?" I ask. "Oh, it's not you who I want. It's Beatrice. And I know for sure this is the best way to get her here." he says and I feel my heart sink. "No, what do you want with her?" I yell. Marcus smirks. "Her." My face turns with disgust. Like, ew. "You're disgusting, she's 17!" "Be quiet boy! Now that your here and we wait for your friends to arrive, we might aswell have some fun." he says with an evil grin. He unloops his belt. I feel fear raise it's ugly head, as Marcus raises his hand up. He brins it down to my face, and I feel white hot pain. It takes everything in me not to scream, as he whips me again.

   40 lashes later, Marcus leaves. I feel my vision go black from the edges. Every movement hurts, so I try to stay still as darkness overtakes me...

   Tris POV

We jump out of the train in abnegation sector. "All these houses look the same. How are we gonna find him?" Marlene asks. "If there's one thing I know from my former factions, it's that they will always help you if you ask" I say an walk up to a house. I don't bother cheking what house it is, so I'm blown away, when my mom opens the door. "M-mom?" "Beatrice?" Mom says, obviously as surprised as me. Before I know it I'm engulfed to a hug. "Mom...can't...breathe..." I manage to say. She lets go of me. "Sorry." "Mom, I need your help." I say. "Oh, these are my friends" I say pointing at them. "Guys, this is my mom, Natalie." I tell them. "I remember you from visiting day. Sorry about my sister though." Will says. "It's quite allright. What do you need help with Beatrice?" "It's just Tris now. And I need the address of Marcus." I say. "Why?" mom asks confused. I bite my lip. Should I tell her? Mom sees me hesitate. "Tris, darling, you can tell me anthing." "Well, he kiddnapped Tobias, my boyfriend." I say. "Have I met this Tobias? You mean his son, Tobias?" she asks. She sure asks a lot of questions for a stiff. The slang word doesn't sound quite right, even in my thoughts. "Tobias is Four, you've met him on the visiting day, remember? You said he was handsome." I whisper the last part. Mom's eyes open with realizesation. "Why would Marcus kiddnapp his own son?" she asks, althought from her voice and body language, I can tell she already knows. "Mom, you know why." I say and she nods. "I do." "Where's dad by the way?" I ask. "He's working. Marcus's home number is 221b(any Sherlock lovers out there? No? Okay.). Good luck." she says and hugs me. "Bye mom, I'll visit you after initiation ends" I promise her. "Okay guys, we have the house number"

   220, 221a, ah here it is, 221b. "Okay guys. Uriah and Lynn, you go to the back door, incase he tries to escape. Mar and Shauna, you go to one side, Will and Christina to the other. Zeke, you coma find Tobias with me." I say, kinda in 'Six' mode. They all do this army salute thing and go take their positions. "You ready?" Zeke asks me as we step up the little staris to the door. "Hell no." I say and knock on the door. "My only wish, dont kill Marcus, if he's dead, we have no evidence against him." I say to Zeke. He nods and the door opens, revealing Marcus. "Where is he?" I ask. I put one hand behind my back, grabbing the gun, but not pulling it out yet. "Where's who?" he asks innocently. If I didn't know him, I'd say he was clueless. But I do know him. "Don't play dumb with us, we know he's here!" Zeke snaps. Then I hear a scream of pain from somewhere the house. "Are you gonna let us in, or are we gonna have to make you?" I ask. Marcus doesn't move, so I pull the gun out and shoot him in the leg. He screams in pain and falls over. "Lets go." I say and run in to the house. "Tobias!" I yell. "I'm...here...aarghh!" I hear a muffeled scream. It comes from beneath us. I look down and see a trapdoor. I try to open it, but it's locked. I shoot the lock, and open it. I see ladders. "Zeke, get everyone here, and make sure he doesn't escape." I say and he nods. "Got it" he runs off and start climbing down the ladder. I see it's not high, and just jump down. My feet hurt from the impact, but I see a door, and run to it, ignoring the pain. "Tobias you in there?!" I yell baning the door. I try to open it, but it's locked too. I groan. "Toby, if you're there, move away from the door, I'm gonna shoot it open!" I yell. I hear a dragging noise, then a tired yell "Shoot away!" I shoot the lock, and with a loud bang it breaks. I push the door open, and what I see, shocks me. I see a bloody, beaten Tobias lying on the floor in a pool of blood. He has a weak smile on his face. I run over to him. "Oh my God are you okay?" I worry. "Yeah, Tris you gottalisten to me, he said I'm not the one he wants, he wants you. Like you're body. Don't let him get you" he whispers and passes out. I'm disgusted. Like, ew. I'm 17, and he's like, 50. "Zeke! I need help!" I yell, and I hear footsteps coming down. I don't turn away from Tobias, bcz I assume it's Zeke. "Can you help me?" I ask, but for the answer, I get hit to the head with something, and my vision goes black.

AN/ first of all, I'm sorry. Miss me?(again, Sherlock anyone?) It has been a while, and for that I am sorry, but I hope you like this chapter, I'll try to update again this week, but no promises! I have a request. If you read this stroty, please comment and vote, it really motivates me to write more to hear your feedback! And holy Dauntless cake 279 reads on this freaking story!!!! Thank you thank you thank you! Y'all deserve a piece off Dauntless cake, and so do I! Lets go get some! And please comment and vote;)

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