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Okay so I got some bad news guys. As some of you may have guessed I'm not going to be finishing this story. However I noticed that some people are still adding this book to their reading lists so I thought it would only be fair to tell you guys that this book won't be continued. I of course have reasons for this and I don't want to go into to much detail as to why but I'll give you my two biggest reasons for not finishing this. The first is that I didn't feel like the story was going anywhere so as some of you may know Jewel was going to learn about Salem and the Grimm in the next chapter but after that there wasn't really any plan for the story or much room for where it could go. The second reason is because Jewel wasn't a very good character in my opinion. He came from the basic idea of being the ultimate weapon but I executed it poorly and he's an overall bland character with little to no personality. He didn't really care about much in this book and what he did care about was because he loved someone, that he really didn't have that much interaction with. He just wasn't a good character in my opinion. I can't really say anything about him being OP because I still tend to do that with my OC's. So yeah, this story will not be continued. However to hopefully make up for this there will be a new story posted within a few days to replace this story. I will be keeping the voting system this book has and I hope to see some of you there. The name of the new book will be named "The son of Salem" and I will be accepting other OC's for the story so if you have an OC that you'd like to see in a RWBY story then please PM me. The story will go up three days from now and I hope to see you all there.

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⏰ Last updated: Mar 19, 2018 ⏰

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