Leaving Behind

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Hey! I am writing my first story ever... Do vote and comment...So the story starts after Punnu's exposure...

Preeta: Karan meri baat to suno... I am sorry...

Says Preeta running behind Karan

Karan: Jab mein tumse kehta tha ki Preeta meri baat suno... Meri baat maano... Prithvi galat hai tumne to meri baat nahi maani aur ab mere peeche padi ho ki mein tumhari baat sunu... Tumhari baat maanu... Tum jao yahan se mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni...

Preeta: Karan please... I am sorry...

Karan: Aise nahi... Tumhe kuch khaas karna padega...

Says Karan faking anger...

Preeta: To kaise? I mean maine tumhe 20 baar call kiya, 50 baar sorry messages bheje lekin tumne to reply hi nahi kiya... Ab tum mujhse kya khaas chahte ho?

Karan: Ek vaada...

Preeta: Kaisa vaada?

Karan: Yeh ki tum hamesha mere saath rahogi...

Preeta gets shocked and they share an eyelock.

Sajda in background music...

Preeta breaks the eyelock.

Karan: I mean as a friend...Jab mein mushkil mein paduga tum mere saath rahogi... Aur saath hi meri har baat par vishwaas bhi karogi...

Preeta: Theek hai... Mai vaada karti hu...

Preeta holds Karan's hand promising him... They share an assuring eyelock...

Sajda in background music...

Sarla: Preeta zara idhar aana...

Preeta: Aayi maa...

Preeta smiles at Karan and turns to leave... She turns to see him... Karan gives her a wink as he does everytime before going... Preeta gets shocked... Karan leaves... Preeta smiles thinking of his childish antics...

Next Morning

Preeta goes to Luthra house where she treats Karan and Rishabh's dadi...

Dadi: Mein jaanti hu Prithvi ki vajah se tujhe  dukh hua hai... Par tu fikr na kar... Jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai... Teri kismet mein zaroor kuch accha likha hoga...

Preeta: Janti hu Dadi... Mujhe apni kismat se koi shikayat nahi hai... Meri kismat mein jo bhi hai vo mujhe manzoor hai... Aaj mein agar us Prithvi se bach paayi hu to sirf karan ki vajah se...

Karan who was passing by hears their conversation and gets happy seeing her positivity towards life... He smiles listening Preeta praising him and leaves for his practice...

Preeta leaves early due to being called by her mom.

Evening

Preeta comes crying along with Shrishti to their room...

Preeta: Jaldi packing kar... Humein aaj raat hi nikalna hoga...

Says bringing her clothes from the cupboard and packing them...

Shrishti: Di... Kya aap sure ho?

Preeta: Ismein sure hone ki kya baat hai? Packing kar...

Shrishti starts packing and they leave their house at night leaving a note... Without Sarla and Dadi coming to know...

Preeta and Shrishti keep their foot out of their home...

Flashback

Preeta and Shrishti put their foot first time in their home...

Flashback ends

They turn and look at the house reminiscing their moments with their family crying, and then leave...

Naina.. jo saanjhe khwab dekhte the
Naina.. bichad ke aaj ro diye hain yun
Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte the
Naina.. sehar mein palken meechte hain yun

Juda huve kadam
Jinhone li thi ye kasam
Milke chalenge hardum
Ab baant'te hain ye gham
Bheege naina.. jo khidkhiyon se jhankte the
Naina.. ghutan mein band ho gaye hai yun

Preeta and Shrishti starts walking outside their house thinking of everything that happened crying... She also thinks of Karan and remembers something:

Flashback

Karan: Ek vaada...

Preeta: Kaisa vaada?

Karan: Yeh ki tum hamesha mere saath rahogi...

Flashback ends

Saans hairan hai
Mann pareshaan hai
Ho rahin si kyun ruaansa ye meri jaan hai
Kyun nirasha se hain
Aas haari huyi
Kyun sawaalon ka utha sa
Dil mein toofaan hain

Naina.. thhe aasmaan ke sitaare
Naina.. grahan mein aaj toot'te hain yoon

She starts crying harder... Seeing this Shrishti who was also crying holds Preeta's hand... Both give each other an assuring smile of having each other at each's side... Shrishti remembers about Sameer: her feelings, nok-jhoks, her crying holding his shirt when Sarla was arrested, His giving her support when Preeta was in fire, their silly fight of .coms, his getting jealous in the Lohri function when she was talking with waiters sweetly... She closes her eyes, cries and asks herself in her mind to forget Sameer... As now they can never be together...

They get into the taxi, crying... Shrishti rests on Preeta's shoulder thinking about her family, Luthra family and specially Sameer while Preeta sees Mumbai for the last time... She reminisces all her family moments, Moments with her mom, Dadi, Love from Luthra family: Rakhi, Mahesh, Dadi, Kritika, Ruchika and Respect from Rishabh. But the most she could remember was Karan: All their silly fights, his keeping her different names, his calling her Kareli, their dances, he telling her that she looked beautiful, their moments in the hotel trying to expose Sherlyn, he making her smile when she was sad or crying, he fighting from goons for her and getting injured both at Rishabh's sangeet and from Sanju and many more... She closes her eyes... They reached the railway station walking like two lost people lifelessly with no emotions on their faces except tears falling from their eyes... Shrishti gets into train while Preeta sees the station remembering their coming to Mumbai... She puts her foot on the train

Flashback

Preeta putting her foot first time in Mumbai on the station.

Flashback ends

Preeta in her mind: 'Alvida Mumbai... Itne kam samay mein humein apnane ke liye shukriya... Humne itne kam samay mein yahan itni acchi yaadein bana li hain ki ab yahan se jaana bahut mushkil ho gaya hai...(Remembers every good moment in Mumbai)

Lekin humein jaana hoga... Kehte hain na ek buri yaad sabhi acchi yaadon ko bigaad deti hai... Aaj humare saath bhi yahi hua...'(Remembers the bad thing happened with them)

Shrisht: Di...

Preeta wipes her tears and gets into the train... They leave Mumbai...

Keep reading to know what happeed that Preeta and Shrishti left Mumbai...





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