Harry Potter OC Critiques [PAUSED]

31 - MissNerdQueen

Full Name: Sendradina Charlotte Potter

[While Rowling tends to stick with either existing names or character traits put into Google Translate, there's no rule against completely making one up. On that note, Sendradina was used once on Yahoo Answers and appears to have never been used anywhere else, so points for creativity!]

Nicknames, Titles, etc: Dina, a shorter version of her name people called her in school; Diney (pronounced Deeney), a mock version of her name her brother and his friends teased her with; Dwarfy Dina (Peeves' nickname for her)

General Appearance: She has fair skin, a  slim face and dark brown eyes. Her hair is long and a wavy dark brown (almost black) that reaches her waist, though she usually puts her hair up. She has a slim yet curvy figure and plump breasts.

[So does she have any scars? How does she usually put her hair up? Is she muscular at all? How does she usually dress? Is she healthy or does she perpetually look kind of sick? Does she wear makeup?]

Role in book: Protagonist, is one of the main characters, though doesn't appear till the second book

[Is she the only protagonist of that book or is she part of a group of protagonists in the second book as well?]

General plot outline of book: She becomes a Hogwarts assistant

[What's that?]

 in the second book and helps Harriet and her friends with their

[I'm just going to assume this got deleted at some point, and say that if you submit this information at a later date I can edit this to include it.]

Age: 32 in her first appearance 

DOB: February 28th 1961

Height: 4'9 (she's always been on the short side)

[People tend to make their characters short rather than tall- I've seen way more characters under five foot than characters over five foot ten. I don't know whether it's just that a lot of authors are short or just a popular trope, but it does mean that I am continually reminded that accio is a really useful spell, as it turns out.]

Weight: 112 lbs

Gender: Female

Sexual/Romantical Orientation: Demisexual (not as attracted to appearances or looks but mainly but a getting know someone and loving them for who they are)

[Demisexuality is defined as attraction based on emotional bonds rather than gender, but I would like to point out that your gender is, 9 times out of 10, a part of who you are.]

Race/Species: Witch

[Is that what it says on her passport?]

House: Gryffindor (1972-1979)

Family: Fleamont Potter (Father/Deceased) Euphemia Potter (Mother/Deceased) James Potter (Older Brother/Deceased) Lily Potter (Sister-in-law/Deceased)

Wand Makeup:Length: 10 inches

Flexibility: Swishy

Wood: Rosewood

Core: Dragon Heartstrings

Personality/how they view themselves: Growing up she never thought of herself as pretty and her brother's teasing didn't help. 

[Does this make her anxious, does it mean that she doesn't think of beauty as a particularly important thing to strive for. . .basically, how does this affect her personality?]

She loves to help others and thinks of herself as a kind and good friend as she tries her best to be.

Ambitions: She wants to get married and raise a family of her own, but only with the man she loves.