Harry Potter OC Critiques [PAUSED]

38 - itskayday

Full Name: Cassiopeia Vega Malfoy (Cass-eeo-peeah) 

[That's the standard pronunciation, yep.]

 Nicknames: Cassie, Cass, Peia (Pansy) 

[Does anyone but Pansy have a preferred nickname? Are there any on that list she only lets certain people call her?]

Appearance: Grey eyes, straight white blonde hair, waist length, Pale porcelain skin. Skinny, no real curves or anything she's a tiny gal. 

[Does she have any identifying birthmarks or scars? Does she have a certain type of clothes she wears a lot? Does she wear her hair loose or tied up? Does she brush and wash it regularly?]

 Role: O/C for the most part, but HP love interest as well though that takes a while, Twin sister of Draco. 

[Is she the main character or a side character though? Is Harry the main character and she's his love interest? Is Draco the main character?]

General Plot: Cassie Malfoy is a bright young witch who realizes her parents have been keeping an enormous secret from her. Armed with anew power she has to decide what side she should take in the wizarding war 

[Okay, she's the main.]

Age: Starts at 11, ends when she is 17 

DOB: June 5, 1980 

Height: 5'4 in.

Weight: 120 lb.

Gender: Female 

 Sexual Orientation: Straight 

Ethnicity: Pure Blood 

[Just gonna assume she's the same white British Human as Draco and leave it there.]

House: Slytherin Family: Narcissa and Lucius Malfoy are her parents, and her twin brother is Draco. They are close, as Cassie values family, but she doesn't agree with a lot of their actions.

[Does she view them as being close to her? The Malfoys were, like, the archetypal Reserved Rich Family Who Dare Not Show Affection in the books, so does she ever feel like they're intentionally closing themselves off from her? Does she value family in a normal, healthy way, or in a Heritage Is Everything way where you have to go down with any sinking ship your dad's on? Does her disagreement with their actions translate to a lot of arguments?]

She has a cousin and aunt, Tonks and Andromeda, whom she began contact in secret her first year. Her other relatives, Bellatrix and Sirius Black, begin the books in Azkaban, where Cassie's never met them, but she grows to like Sirius quite a bit. Her Black family heritage is pretty important in the book. 

Pets: Cassie got a cat named Nox her first year, a lazy gray cat who normally slinks around the Slytherin common room, or naps on Cassie's bed. She often uses Draco's owl, Archimedes, to send letters. 

[And he just lets her do that?]

Wand Type: Elm Wood, 13 inches, Phoenix feather core, sturdy. Floral engravings on the bottom, and a few up at the top. 

[Elm wood is for dignified people who want reliable results. Like Lucius Malfoy, which I'm assuming he was happy about. Phoenix feathers are the exact opposite, being wide in range in exchange for being unpredictable.

I don't know how she got the floral engravings, but that seems cool.]

Personality: Cassie is a pretty gentle girl, she's not one who would jump up into action, and she certainly doesn't think she's brave. She is however quite smart, matching with Hermione or competing for best in class, though Cassie doesn't really care about being the best. She wants to be a healer, and likes helping people. She hates her families views on blood purity, and the way her dad and brother talk to people, but she's smart enough to stay out of it in public. She's pretty terrified of being disowned, because she knows her views don't line up with her parents. First year she gets close to her cousin Tonks, which gives her hope that even if the worst happened she might be okay. Cassie can be a little oblivious sometimes, when it comes to emotions, just because she's a bit emotionally stunted from childhood, but she's very quick about picking up information.