Honest Opinion

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I'm on a status book roll today.

Back on topic. I need your guys honest opinion about this story idea. I'm thinking of submitting it to Radish (it's a writing site, but it only accepts a handful of people to write on it. Others can make an account to read.)

•It's Complicated•
Payton Myers is a 21 year old college student who works at the Rosman Resort and Spa during he summers to help pay for medical school. She meets Kyle when he's grabbing a hotdog by the pool. In a suit. She doesn't recognize him and They hit it off.Next thing she knows they're heading up to his room.

Kyle Bates is the CEO of Rosman Resort and Hotel. He's escaped there to get away from his wife, who's been driving him crazy. He can't help but feel trapped in a loveless marriage, at least on his part. He wasn't expecting to develop feelings for Payton when he takes her up to his room.

What happens when Payton finds out about Kyle's relationship status? Is there something real between them?

*disclaimer*
This story in no way reflects my personal beliefs. I don't support cheating, but I do think this would make an interesting story.

Thoughts? Comments? Suggestions? Likes? Dislikes?

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