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(Megan's POV)
I was completely mortified by what I just heard. It's like everything I feared was crashing down on me at once; like a ton of red bricks- on my head.
I held my face in my hands and my hood inbetween my fingers. I could feel the room grow more and more tense, so I opened my pinky to see if I could catch anyone staring.
Sure enough, everyone was glaring at me and Brian. I started to cry a little.
"Um, 'Little Sullivan? What?" Mery said.
All of the sudden, the silence was completely destroyed by everyone asking questions. I didn't bother to respond to anyone, so I just continued to silently sob while everyone went nuts.
"Woah woah woah woah wait." Matt said, standing up with Valary hooked onto his arm. "Guys, shut the fuck up!"
Immediatly everyone turned their attention to Matt. except for Michelle- she was busy glaring daggers at Brian.
"Megan." Matt said, slowly walking toward me. I opened my eye a little and fangirled in my mind while I watched this perfect, amazing figure of one of my idols make his way toward me.
He knelt down in front of me and my heart stopped. I covered my face with my hoodie out of instinct to save myself embarrassment.
His beautiful hazel eyes studied my overly large blue eyes, and furrowed his brow. I most obviously blushed, and my tears came to a halt.
"Woah..." he said.
I knew what he was going to say after that.
"You have his eyes." He said. I sniffed and wiped my eye a little.
"Do you have anything to say for yourself?!" Michelle finally snapped at Brian, but Matt kept his attention on me.
"What?" Brian asked. "Seriously! What else do i have to say to this girl?!" he raised his voice slightly. Michelle rolled her eyes.
"You made her cry, Brian. The last thing this girl needs is tears!" She said, gesturing toward me.
Matt ignored their argument and gently pulled the hood of my hoodie back, and took my chin in his index finger and thumb. "It's amazing."
He was completely fascinated with my face, it seemed, but I didn't know what to do. THE M. Shadows was sitting in front of me, talking about my face, but also, THE Synyster Gates and Michelle DiBenedetto, or, Haner, were arguing because Syn made me cry.
I have to say, this was the absolute worst and absolute best day of my life.
I cried more.
Michelle threw her hands in the air after arguing with Brian. "Whatever, Brian. Just, whatever."
She came and knelt down beside me, so she was facing me and Matt.
They both just stared at me while I awkwardly failed at keeping my tears in. Eventually, after a few minutes of complete silence except for a few "Dude" 's from Zacky, and noises from Brian, Zacky stood up and the others did the same. They all just left Me, Michelle, and Matt in the room by ourselves.
I could hear their laughter and shouting from where I was sat... I think they had gone outside. Whatever they were doing, it seemed a hell of a lot more light-hearted than what I was doing.
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