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Belated Ideas or Improvement Ideas on My Stories

Have you ever written a story or fan fic and after you finish it, you think it over and say I wish I did it this way or I wish I thought of that before! I've been having those thoughts alot lately, especially when I go back and look through my stories. 

Don't get me wrong, I'm still proud of my stories but part of me wishes I could go back and fix up the stories. 

So I wanted to write a little chapter about those belated ideas on those stories or improvements/rewrite I wish I could do and see what you guys think of these ideas or your thoughts on my stories and if you guys agree or disagree with me. So here we go!

Now with the Sherlock stories, I'll have to say I'm pretty proud for what I've written. I really like how they turned out, although the sex scenes I wrote I feel like I could've insinuated them or implied the scenes instead of going into detail. I'm not sure if it's just me, but when I go back to look over those stories I kinda cringe when I get to the love scenes. Course they were my first series of fan fics and I thought this was okay but now I kinda feel a little uncomfortable writing it and I just give a little tease to those kind've scenes, like I did with Life is Strange 2.

The Danny Phantom ones, I really wish I held off the Reader and Danny's relationship a little bit longer. But at the time I was writing it, I kinda lost interest in it and stopped writing it so I made them get together in the Ember episode. So the story was discontinued until I got my spark back and got back to writing it and finished it.

And like I've said for my Endgame story, specifically the Doctor Strange one, I wish I put in a son in the story but I didn't know what to do with the child so I didn't put him in. So to make up for it is I gave a daughter to Star-Lord and the Reader. But whenever Doctor Strange 2 comes out, there's a possibility for a child in that one. I want to wait and see how the movie turns out...if and when we get it.

And lately, I've been wishing in my Detroit Become Human story that I ended with the alternative ending where the Reader died and becomes an android cuz I think it would've been a good idea for a continuation but who knows! I might do one anyway!

My Harry Potter stories, I really wish I could improve on like maybe giving a better backstory of the Reader in that story or had her have a storyline of her own but it is what is.

Recently, another idea I had was for The Last Of Us, where during the 20 year gap the Reader and Joel were separated. They are still technically married but they just separated after a falling out and the Reader went one way and Joel went another way. Eventually they would meet each other again when Joel takes Ellie to Bill's place and that's when the Reader comes in and they reunite. I've also thought of an idea for a story during the earlier months of the apocalypse but I'm not for sure yet.
Also I can't wait for the freaking sequel!!

I think my Walking Dead stories are probably among my best stories and I'm very, very proud of those stories especially the final season. And I want to thank my friend, animeangel, for that. Animeangel helped me out with some scenarios and some of the romantic scenes between Clement and the Reader were mostly their idea and I couldn't have done it with them!

The Star Trek ones, I really need to find the script of the 3rd one so I could write that one, but other than that I do like what I did with the two. Part of me wishes that I made the Reader and Khan previous lovers but I thought making them siblings would be a great twist since I figured people would expect them to have been lovers.

The Hobbit ones, it might just be me, but I feel like those are my weaker ones. I think I did those for some readers than for myself cuz I'm not a huge Lord of the Rings fan, I like the movies they're good but they are movies I would watch every once in awhile. 

And let's see....my Great Mouse Detective and Rise of the Guardians stories I'm proud of those and glad how they turned out.

I'm also proud of my Uncharted series and I honestly can't wait to get to the later parts of the 3rd game and into the 4th game.

And don't think I've forgotten my Potterlock story, I've just kind've hit a writer's block on that one. So hopefully sometime soon, I'll get back to writing that one! I'm just trying to figure out what to do with some of the Sherlock characters in the world of Harry Potter. I'm trying to figure out a purpose for them. If anyone, who is a fan of both Harry Potter and the BBC Sherlock series, give me some of your ideas. Sometimes hearing others ideas spark an inspiration for me!

And so far I'm liking how the Life is Strange 2 story is turning out and I can't wait for episode 4 in August!

Anyway tell me what you guys think down below!