Hello!!! So for everyone reading my story, it's easy to tell I'm a beginner and this is my first story. I wanted to ask what you guys thought of the last chapter, I want to go in more depth with Simon and more characters later.
Since I'm a new writer, I want to ask your opinion on the emotion in the last chapter. What did you guys think? I'm practicing, and wanted to ask you.
Was it badly portrayed, lame, okay, or pretty good? I'm open to feed back and questions!! 😁
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Red and Blue
FantasiSimon died, and starts his new life in a new body.In a fantasy world. He's a cheat, crazy powerful, but did he truly want to live? Pretty bad at descriptions. Swear it's better than it sounds.😅
