Red and Blue

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Hello everyone, and before you freak out I'm not abandoning the story. 😰

I'm sorry I've been gone so long, It wasn't high priority when I was writing at the time because I was in marching band, and had a heavy schedule.

Now in school at the moment it wasn't something I was thinking about. I finally remembered how long I was away a month ago.

I looked over the story and honestly don't think it's good at all. Simon doesn't have a big personality, kinda just your typical nice guy with angsty feels.

Fai to be honest was a last minute character, and was rushed. He doesn't have much of a personality either.

Many other things I questioned about it. Writing isn't the best. It can be random at times. I was thinking of dropping it, but your guy's comments stopped me.

I wanted to ask if you guys wanted a re-write? I don't have to, I can probably fix and hopefully make this story better without a rewrite.

Just keep in mind if there's a rewrite there will be a few changes. I'd especially keep the characters consistent, Simon especially. He was supposed to be witty, sarcastic, won't take sh*t type, but had that secret lingering dark thoughts and memories.

I skimmed some parts and realized that Simon became just a angsty character. That was really all there was to his character. He was rushed and I didn't know his exact personality while writing, which was my mistake.

Again I probably could fix this story, but I'm also suggesting it would be probably better for a rewrite.

Please give me your opinions, and if you have questions I'd gladly anwser.