Hello everyone! I wanted to thank everyone for your comments it definitely helped my decision.
I just published the rewrite and for warning there will be some changes. Most prominent is Simon's personality. He will be more michivious, playful, etc.
Also the beginning chapters will be pretty similar but there will be changes. Also there is what I've dubbed the Fai problem. Fai never had much of a huge role other than carrying people around.
Simon needs someone or something with him though because over a year in seclusion will make anyone lonely, and slightly insane.
So I wanted to ask your opinion, bring Fai in, just more personality and not as rushed, or have a new companion/animal. Give your opinion because this could shape the story someway or another.
Also tell me in the rewrite if you like the original chapter better or the new one, I'd also like to know what you think of Simon's new personality. Any questions or thoughts I'd gladly respond to.
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Red and Blue
ФэнтезиSimon died, and starts his new life in a new body.In a fantasy world. He's a cheat, crazy powerful, but did he truly want to live? Pretty bad at descriptions. Swear it's better than it sounds.😅
