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You're probably confused.

You probably think that I've gone insane.

You've thought right.

Have you ever noticed that in some stories people don't know the difference between a period, a question mark, etc? Some people (no names) basically write like this:

"Hi. Hi are you." He says (also look at the dialogue!!)

"I am good. Do you want to go to the movies later." She says

"Oh, no. My house is on fire. AHHH." He says.

What was that?

That was wrong in so many ways.

1. THIS NEEDS EXCLAMATION POINTS AND QUESTION MARKS!!!

2. -_- The dialogue. Go back to the first rant.

3. AHHHH <- Was that necessary? It could've easily been 'he screams'.

4. Says, says, says. Couldn't it have been greets, responds, cries? I'll give you a big fat YES.

Got it?

Yes?

No?

Direct message me.

Better?

Better.

See ya.

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