BOOK TITLE: Queen's Downfall
AUTHOR: @WhoIsEllena
RATINGS: 8 / 10
TITLE:
It's an interesting title. Title pa lang curious na ang mga readers, and that's great.
BOOK COVER:
I didn't get the picture sa cover. It'll be understantable if may crown or castle, but it's just a picture of a woman's body.
In my own opinion, I think you should pick a picture that represents tge word queen.
BLURB / SYNOPSIS:
It's nice, nakalagay ang mga short details ng plot ng story.
CHARACTERIZATION:
No problem na nakita ko, it's fine.
DIALOGUE AND NARRATION:
It's also great, maganda ang pagkaka-narate at pag gawa mo ng dialogues. Double check lang to be sure sa mga uses of words and sentences.
GRAMMATICAL AND TYPO ERRORS:
Wala naman akong nakitang mali dito. Like what I said kanina, double check lang.
OWN OPINION:
Keep on writing, your works are great. I just suggest yung sa cover mo na make it compatible with the title. All in all it's nice. Thank you.
CRITIC BY: KenzyChloe24
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