BOOK TITLE: Hate To Love You
AUTHOR: @jho-llybie
RATINGS: 10 / 10
TITLE:
Given the title, it will make you think why. I read the first chapters and I see why.
BOOK COVER:
I like you book cover it's beautiful but I feel like it's full romance > historical fiction.
BLURB/SYNOPSIS:
Maganda. Sa description pa lang nakikita ko na yung title. I haven't read the story content while writing this but I think it is predictable. Yet, it's still the curiosity that will make you read further.
CHARACTERIZATION:
Your character arc is good. Plus, you defined your character's personality well. Lahat may defined na ugali at kita iyon sa bawat kabanata.
DIALOGUE/NARRATION:
Wala akong napansing malalaking mali.
Iyong "." at "," sa bawat pagtatapos ng dialogue.
Kahit ako ay nagkakamali roon.
GRAMMATICAL/TYPO ERROR:
Unavoidable. Just reread.
OWN OPINION:
Maganda ang pagkakagawa. Simple lang ang plot at talagang maihahalintulad sa tunay na buhay ang kilos ng mga characters.
Unang beses kong nawalan ng sasabihin dahil maganda ang pagkakasulat nito. Nakakaenganyong basahin. I'll support it.
Pero hindi ko nakita ang dahilan kung bakit historical fiction ito. Iyon lang naman.
I'm giving feedback based on my own liking / preferences and writing rules. I'm only giving feedback based on the technicalities of writing and if it catches my interest. Plot wise your story is great because it's your own idea, beliefs, and experience. It's a part of you. Keep the passion burning!
CRITIC BY: si-huli
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