Hi, I'm doing a feedback section for this story. I want my active readers to answer a few questions regarding this novel. Things I can improve on, things I can change, and things that can basically make the novel even better. As I've said before it takes a village I can not make this story a huge success without the help of others. Please respond to the questions below with thoughtful and engageing answers, and if I agree the changes may be applied.
1. What are a few charcter qualities and personality traits you dislike? (Please be specific about the particular character.)
2. What story scenes did not make sense to you or left you confused?
3. Overall what did you not like about the novel as a whole. (Please be specific and considerate.)
Once again thanks for checking out my first novel and hopefully you have enjoyed reading Epiphany thanks! Leave a comment responding to the questions above.
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Epiphany
General FictionTrials and hardships are nothing new to Tiana, she's taken them on her entire life. Living in survival mode has taught her that life is what you make it, so with a leap of faith she jumps into the unknown. Without notion or reason she searches for s...
