So, its been awhole since I've updated because of school and stuff and me forgetting everything thats happened. So I thought that going through it and editing and rewriting would put me back in the groove.
It did. Only issue now is its cold downstairs and the computer is in the living room where my family can watch me write. But thats an easy issue to deal with.
Anyway, I did some esiting and was glad it wasn't much. I did change some little things and that's why I made this list. It tells you what edit s I did for the chapter so you can decide if you want to reread it or not. The list can also be found at the bottom of each chapter.
When I mean not a lot of changes or none, they're really small changes such as rewording of sentences or fixing of small mistakes.
So, yup, hopefully I update soon. I'm just a little stuck.
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Chapter 1:
Some changes to text, rewording mostly.
A device hides Tifa and Demyx, not a spell.
Deleted prologue and added definition to this chapter.
Chapter 2:
Not a lot of changes to text, rewording mostly.
Chains to the door weren't broken but melted off.
Chapter 3:
Not a lot of changes to text, rewording mostly.
Chapter 4:
Not a lot of changes to text.
Chapter 5:
Not a lot of changes to text.
Demyx's songs do cost MP.
Chapter 6:
Not a lot of changes.
Very small detail changes concerning how Terra responds.
Chapter 7:
Not a lot of changes.
Chapter 8:
Leon whispers Vanitas's name instead of Roxas.
No changes other than that.
Chapter 9:
No significant changes.
Chapter 10:
Deleted the whole spiel about naming the trios and such.
Not a lot of changes other than that.
Chapter 11:
Not a lot of changes.
Still kinda iffy about Ven's result.
Chapter 12:
Near to zero changes done.
Chapter 13:
Just cut out references to specific stuff.
Not really significant changes other than that.
Chapter 14:
None
Chapter 15:
No big changes.
Chapter 16:
None
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