23 | pagdurusa ng pagkakaisa

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Umaga at dapit-hapon ay masaya
Gabing madilim, maraming nagdurusa
Tiwala sa sarili ay nawawala
Tila ay tumakbo ang pagkakaisa

Ang away at gulo ay di masugpuan
Sikat ng araw at liwanag ng buwan
Dilim ng lungkot, sila ay tinakpan
Sila ay kinukubli, di mo malaman

Hindi maikubli na wala ito
Wala ito, madudulot ay ang gulo
Pagkakaisa't wikang dulot sa tao
Patigasin natin tulad ng semento

Pagdurusa ang ginagawa ng wika
Pagdurusa pag walang pagkakaisa
Pagkakaisa, hinahanap tuwina
Pagkakaisa, nasasaan ka ba?

This is the second poem I wrote for that hell-driven competition and yes, it doesn't make sense and I can see why I didn't win

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This is the second poem I wrote for that hell-driven competition and yes, it doesn't make sense and I can see why I didn't win. It's a mess, if you really understood it from my language.

Maybe, after all these years, my entries really don't deserve winning. Haha.

That's it. The end.

 The end

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