What was so special
What was so beautiful
What was so delightful
Than a blue white star when the moon's full?The blue white star up high
High up there in the sky
High up there but never shy
High up there to say goodbyeA vow we've made before
a vow we've thought we'd explore
A vow that made us want more
A vow that made the blue white star a boreWe never knew we'd abandoned
The blue white star of our childhood
We never knew we'd screwed
The blue white star that changed our moodThe blue white star of our life
A luminous thing that never left our side
The star that led our every stride
The star that once have been our prideForgetting the blue white star is a mistake
A very stupid mistake to make
A mistake done for something's sake
A mistake similar to a plagueA mistake had been made
A vow that forever stayed
The blue white star that never betrayed
Now forgotten, now ought to fadeThe blue white star we see
Have once been special to me
We said we wouldn't let it be
And that vow will never be the keyNever said a word
Never declared to the whole world
The blue white star of our childhood
Left us with a very sad moodThe blue white star of our life
A luminous thing that left our side
The star that left us on our every stride
The star that once have been our prideOkay, that was terrible.
First off, there are so many wrong things there and some stanzas read wrong or didn't flow well. The whole poem really doesn't mean anything but that the blue-white star, whatever that is, left them. That's it.
So, what do you think? Comment and don't be afraid to hold back. xD
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