Hey guys. I know it's been a while and I set this story as complete a while back but I just want people's opinions on this.
Is there any feedback people could give me to improve my writing?
You don't have to be polite lol and this was my first story I wrote so i've obviously improved somewhat but it seems that people don't really like my writing anymore and it's a bit disheartening but I want to improve.
I know I need to improve on punctuation since i'm aware i'm horrible at it 😅
But do I need to be more descriptive? Better vocabulary? I just want to know what people think.
I might come back to this story one day I do want to edit some of the chapters since again this was my first book so it was really cringe.
Have a good day/night!
(I'm going to post this in all my books)
