His Evil Cinderella by DawnGhost
Description:
A twisted fairytale: How far would you go to get your perfect fairytale ending?
The prince had managed to find the strange, ethereally beautiful girl who'd fled from that fateful Coronation Ball, with only a single glass slipper left behind as a clue. But what did Cinderella do after she got her Happily Ever-After? She did get it, didn't she?
Rae Wyman dreams of a girl, every night. She haunts him with her mellifluous voice, her mesmerizing eyes and her small, arcane smiles, making him yearn for her even though he's never seen her before in his life. Yet there's a strange feeling blossoming inside him every day, a feeling which he can't describe, growing so wild and restless that he doesn't know where his sanity went.
Why does it feel like...
...she'd known his weakest point? And had used it to destroy him to a million little pieces?
My Review:
The book has a very interesting plot but at the begining,it can be quite confusing as I did not know in what way is Rae and the girl is related and I had to re-read the whole chapter to understand it for a while. But the chapter gets interesting when the next few chapters unravels and it flows into my brain clearer and I had a better understanding.
It has indeed captured my attention and I would want to read on and see what would happen next.
As for the grammar and spelling,I didn't spot any obvious mistakes. The story is writen in great detail,which is always good,but make sure not to have any run-ons.
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OVERALL : ★★★★★
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