Doomed

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Doomed by Rumple-

Description:

A love story, about a lost man and a simple girl.

My review:

✔Story Plot

I loved the plot. At first, it was a little confusing but as you go on, the puzzle pieces slowly fitted together and you'll understand.

I like how the story is unique- unlike all those typical vampire stories out there. Those books that can be found in bookstores pale in comparison to doomed.

✔Story Description

You really need to rewrite a new description. There's no use if you have a badass book but nobody will read it because of a simple description.

When writing one, remember to not give out too much information or there won't be suspense.

✔Cover

It's simple but does the trick.

✗Criticism

What I felt unrealistic was how the characters had progressed so quickly. Try to smoothen out the timing (up to you) but make it too lengthy and your readers will be struggling to keep their eyes open while reading this.

♤Ratings : ★ ★ ★ ☆ ☆

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