The Fallen by katiebearloves
Description:
Celine is a fallen angel. She hunts the things that go bump in the night. Vampires werewolfs. Then she meets Stephan a vampire and everything changes.
Warnings: Rated R
My review:
I think this book is awesome, I love the characters and the plot! However what you lack in this story is more descriptions. For example, you should elaborate more on their meeting and what Celine felt after the meeting and all. You can't make them kiss after meeting each other.
For a story twist, make her reject or something. If I was her, I can't accept the fact that I've fallen in love with him- I'm hunting down his kind, I'll resent myself for loving him.
Well, that's my opinion but it's your story and I already love it~
Ratings: ★★★★★
This story has 4 chapters
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