Two-Sided Perfectionist

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Two-Sided Perfectionist by Tribble

Description :

"Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it."

Anny Day is a serial killer who shows no mercy.  Her deeds are thoroughly planned and masterfully executed.  She calculates and deciphers the weaknesses of those she deems worthy for death.  It is impossible to escape your fate once Ms. Day has targeted you.  Death is inevitable.

Anny Day is an expert crime scene investigator.  She examines every detail no matter how small or insignificant.  After being recently designated leader of a case involving a skilled serial killer, Anny is working diligently to catch the criminal.

With multiple personalities and no memory of her other identity's actions, Anny Day is left chasing her own shadow.

Will Anny ever be okay?

My Review :

Okay,so I just finished reading it and here's the good and bad points ->

The description you provided inside the book is very detailed,but sometimes it can be quite confusing for me... I think you call it run-ons. FYI- Run-ons are VERY long sentences. You can use it once in a while but if you do that too frequently,it causes writers to skim and makes writing weak. You should work on that.

The grammar and spelling is great,so far I haven't spotted any obvious mistakes. The story plot is all right,but in the beginning it's a bit confusing,and I had no idea what it meant until I read further...

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Well,this is the end of the review! I hope I helped you a lot! (:

OVERALL : ★★★★☆

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