I'm yours_One Direction FanFic by aneerose
-No description provided-
My Review :
It's a great book. I wasn't a fan of One Direction but after reading this,I think I'm going to be a fan ((:
Ok,so the good points was,the story plot was great. You got my attention from the beginning to the middle.
The bad points. We hate saying this to writers so please don't throw pumpkins at me *Ducks under a flying pumpkin*
Remember when I said you got my attention from the beginning to the middle? Well,the parts way behind was getting boring. No offence,writer but it was getting like the same thing again and again... You might want to invest more time into adding more 'action' into the parts in the back.
And the punctuation...It's okay,you just need to change those from the first to the forth chapter.I thought it has been looking weird. If it's just me,then I'm sorry~
Last but not least,the story. You should elaborate more before you let them be couples. Because seriously,no one dates a guy whom you just met in less than 24 hours. I know the phrase 'love at first sight' but this is seriously ironic...
__________
Well,this is the end of the review. I hope I helped you! (:
OVERALL : ★★★☆☆
YOU ARE READING
Book Reviews & recommendations♡ (Completed)
Teen FictionA place to ask for a book review or find good reads to add to your reading list♡ ✎ Irregular updates are to be expected ✎ This is completed.
