Setting up 1D by 1D_TeenageDream
Description:
One Direction split up fifteen years ago.
They haven't spoken since.
Sonny's been brought up not knowing her fathers former band mates.
Her dad's been different since her mother left to America for work.
But one faithful day, she runs into a certain ex-band members daughter, and things take off, then they set a plan.
'Let's get the band back together'
My review:
✔Story Plot
I love how you create different backgrounds for the different characters, with their own special personality. It makes the story appear much more realistic.
I also really liked how you made it so the main characters met and bonded within strange circumstances. Not many authors would go to that extent to create a plot twist.
✔Story Description
It says just enough, not giving too much about the story plot away. I see effort in it!
✔Cover
It's not bad, kind of appealing.
✗Criticism
Not much bad things to point out, however you can improve by using a wider variety of adjectives and being more descriptive; not too descriptive though, some readers will be pissed off at reading how the cup of coffee is emiting heat and the ripples remind you of the beach waves. Don't go that far.
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