Finding Cinderella by xoxoStardustxoxo
Description:
They always had their life with chaos and mix-ups, but after that one, thrilling event, he eventually found himself searching for a way to know his extraordinary ‘Princess’, while she found herself searching for an escape from her evil ‘Prince’.
Fairytale? Nah. More like a nightmare.
My Review:
Interesting plot,although this type of twist has been retold many times but you just made it seem more fresh and appealing although your description could use a change. It's too short and does not hold enough information. Try something like this-
Ever since they met each other,their life had been chaotic and complicated. Until one unexpected event in school brought them together,he eventually found himself searching for a way to know his extraordinary ‘Princess’, while she found herself searching for an escape from her evil ‘Prince’.
That's just an example. I suck at descriptions too. Just try to make it interesting but you cannot reveal too much information or they won't read the story. After all,there isn't any need if you already know half the story from reading the description. You're not doing a summary here!
The story is just perfect to me: not too much un-needed information scrunched into a chapter,and you can understand the story without having to re-read the whole chapter. Grammar and spelling is great,no obvious mistakes! And the book cover,it's a keeper!
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I'm terribly sorry for delaying your reviewI feel so bad! I hope I did help you though (:
OVERALL : ★★★★★
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