A Sci-fic by KillerCatZiller
Description:
It was around dawn; Sunrise. Here I stood with the look of a tornado survivor... dusty and ragged. A pistol in hand and a belt-fed strapped to my back... My surroundings were cold, dark, and abandoned. Dead bodies lay everywhere, just as scattered as the wasted bullets. Maybe we all could've had a chance if they gave us one...
My Review:
Okay, so I don't really get this story. I went mainly because of the awesome description but I had no idea what it was talking about.
Firstly, you rambled on too much about unrelated stuff. You did not give a proper introduction from the begining, which makes it somehow even more confusing to begin with. No offence, I kind of love the story plot but sometimes it just bores me and I just flip to the action parts.
Ratings: ★★☆☆☆
The story has 10 chapters
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