Update.

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Okay, all things considered, I'd say the re-writing is going well, but for some weird reason, I've decided to keep this story up and publish the re-written one too-

I will hopefully take this one down at some point, And you could tell me which one is better too, so yup.

Ahhhh okay, I'm gonna go back to reading now.

Adios Amigos.

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