Here you can see ideas, that I could use in this story, but they didn't find appliance in it:
Before start, let me warn you - when I said "plan" it wasn't like I planned something 2 days before writing or something like that. My "plan" is creating, when I write, change with every idea I have and often it's plan just for one chapter. This story is total improvisation.
- Prologue - Fall of "Hope" - it was probably most unplanned chapter of this story. I had straight plan of making it, but after all only thing that worked out was place and time of destroying "Hope". In the plan, chapter starts 3 months earlier, when commander of uprising got killed, but this plan didn't succeed, because of my laziness at that time and too big timeskips when writing it
- Chapter 1 - Painful Memories - this chapter would go in other way, than it went. Most of it was Mikel's flashback, but at first I wanted to make a fight in this chapter. Denied, because fight at the beginning of story didn't fell ok with me.
- Chapter 3 - First Impression - there weren't much of changes, I just wanted to make this chapter longer and let You, readers know why Eora decided to work with Mikel. Yes, there wouldn't be any POV changes. In fact I reminded about something like POV change, when reading another story, that inspired me to write longer chapters
- Chapter 4 - Unexpected Guests - at first Mikel and Eora spotted ringleader and after hard battle, won against them and Mikel retrieved her memory module. Why I changed it? Whole day I had M4A1's pictures on Pinterest and couldn't stop thinking about her. Plan got changed because of Pinterest's algorithms.
- Chapter 5 - Eora's Feelings - this chapter would go in another way; Eora's "confession" would be much later, at some "epic" fight, when she would sacrifice herself for Mikel. Why it was there then? I don't know. It was late and I was just writing anything, that got to my mind. I didn't even checked my grammar (it would be worse, than it is now). Next day I was like "WTF I made?!" but just corrected my grammar and left this chapter like that.
- Chapter 7 - Dangerous Encounter - I wouldn't let you see M4A1's POV, if I would end this chapter as planned. You would see what happened in base upon their return and before that mission in another chapter, muuuuch later. With this plan, I would make "G&K base conquer" part later, but I run out of ideas at that moment and made it appear faster.
- Chapter 9 - Rescue of the Dead - this chapter would be longer, because I would add there M4A1's flashbacks from past, but decided to add timeskip there. Why? Because I was so fuckin sleepy, that I hardly saw letters on my keyboard.
- Chapter 11 - Vengeance of Dead Man - I was thinking, if I should add this sadistic part at the end, or not. Because I knew what I will write in next chapter (it ended up as next after next chapter) and thought, that it will still be sadistic, no matter where I put it, here or there, I added it here, where it would better fit in. Second thing, that was changed was contract content - 404 would stay in base, but this part changed because of FMOS in UMP 45's M.I.N.D.
- Chapter 12 - When Storm Silenced, We See Dead Ones - in this chapter would die ST AR-15 or 416. I decided to kill ST AR-15. BUT before I decided to add this, I wanted to add part of content from chapter 13, but with slight changes - ST AR-15 would go with Mikel's team, same as rest of AR team and 404, leaving base to M38, before humans appear.
As you can see this story would go in totally different ways (I'm slightly shocked, that I got so much ideas), but it went in this way. I hope, that you are enjoying this storyline. Maybe I will make some special chapters, where I will show you how "this" chapter would go, if it would be as I wanted to do it at first. For now my plan for special chapters is let you see what happened in meantime or before events in chapters. I don't know when I will release them, but they wouldn't count as normal chapter and they can appear at random time.
That's everything from me, Bye!
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