Falling For Him

FFH: Re-written (and the sequel)

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I rushed this story because I felt like I needed to in order to keep you guys happy with regular updates (which failed anyway). Therefore the story doesn't have an actual story line that it follows and it isn't exciting at all. In fact, I don't like it very much.

So I have already copied all the chapters and put them into a book that I've titled "Falling For Him (Re-written)" and have started editing it already with new chapters and added on things to the original chapters to make it more interesting.

This book will follow the same characters but I will add more chapters and put some twists on the story to make it longer and more enjoyable.

Things I want to change:

•Personally I think that Izzy went from not liking Jason to liking Jason too fast. And because of that they got together pretty quickly too. (And the tree root thing was pathetic, I'm sorry).

•Also, the thing that happened in France with Elizabeth was a last minute thing that I put in because nothing ever happened to break Jason and Izzy apart even for a short amount of time. I will keep that little 'twist' but I want to have more like that.

•The first few chapters were ones that I wrote 4 years ago so they probably need serious editing, I think more should happen with Zac before Jason and Izzy get together.

Here's a lengthened blurb of the sequel 'The Missing One' which I will dedicate my time to fully after finishing the rewrite.

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"You may wear your mask well. But he wears it better."

When Jason Holland was only four years old, his twin brother Nathan went missing from a park in their hometown.

Nearly fifteen years later Jason has a wonderful girlfriend, an amazing best friend and a community of people around him who fully support him in everything he does.

Jason encounters a boy who is covered in blood, scars and mud. One thing is certain. This boy is Nathan Holland.

There are questions to be asked and answers to be given. But there's one problem. Nathan won't speak to anyone but his twin. And even Jason can't get the truth out of him.

Nathan gets involved with eighteen year old Lisa Dickson after saving her life, paying some people that she owes a lot of money to. Of course they fall in love with each other.

But is love enough for Nathan to finally tell the truth about what happened to him in those key years? Or will the truth lie buried underneath his expressionless mask and secrets that he has learnt to live with?

Sometimes the deepest secrets can be uncovered if you know how to look. But sometimes the person hiding them knows the game better than you do.

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This is probably the last 'part' I will be adding to this story so goodbye and thank you so much for everything.

Miss_mysterious_girl xox

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