Okay...do you guys think this story could be better? Should I just change the premise of the story to just romance? I'll be honest, I'm still learning about BDSM so maybe that's why the scenes aren't as good. I used to be good at these types of "scenes" but lately, I guess I haven't been truly happy. I wrote this story a couple of years ago and I thought it was good, but maybe not. What do y'all think? Should I just scrap the whole thing? Comment please! Cause I'm writing a sequel and I'm thinking I should just scrap it and just make it a short story. Let me know what y'all think
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ChickLitEllie Coleman: Aspiring psychologist, introverted, reserved, safe.....and a submissive? No... Of course not. She couldn't be, or could she? Ellie believes the world to be black and white, day and night. Simple. Boring. That is until she literally r...
