Hey guys, this is a story in development! I'm going to try and redo Age of Pirates in a different way!
I added way too many characters to the crew, and that got really hectic, so I decided to give it a new try, while making it different! Hope you g...
Near the palace, you arrived with Jack, Natsu, Gray, Gajeel, Juvia, Vivi and well ... Happy I guess.
Happy: Hey, I can be useful here!
Ugh, why do you have to be the one fourth wall breaker in all of this?
Happy: Because it's me.
You're such a troll. Anyway, Crocodile and Robin were there.
Vivi: Wait ... is that ... FATHER!!!!
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Nefertari Cobra (King of Alabasta and Vivi's Father!)
Cobra: Vivi ... you shouldn't have come here.
(Y/N): YOU FUCKER!!
Crocodile: Another step and he breathes no more. I can suck up all the nutrients in his body. But once I get the Pluton and destroy the central Plaza, this country will be mine.
Jack: PLUTON?! THE ANCIENT WEAPON?!
Gajeel: WHAT?! YOU DID ALL THIS FOR THAT?! I DON'T EVEN HAVE A SHRED OF GUILT ANYMORE FOR BEING ON THIS CREW!!
Juvia: How could you use something so horrible?
Crocodile: Like you traitors are one to talk? Now then-
He goes to attack!
(Y/N): OH NO YOU DON'T!! JAWBREAKER THUNDER AXE!!!
Jack: PURGATORY SLASH!!!
Gajeel: IRON DRAGON AXE!!!
Natsu: FIRE DRAGON IRON FIST!!
Juvia: WATER NEBULA!!!
Gray: ICE MAKE: HAMMER!!!
As all of you attack, Crocodile grabs Vivi, and throws her from the palace!
Straw Hats: VIVI!!!!
You all race after her, but then-
She's grabbed and-
???: GUM GUM BAZOOKA!!!
Crocodile: No ... you ... STRAW HAT!!
Luffy stood there.
Straw Hats (minus Gajeel: LUFFY!!!
Gajeel: About damn time, Captain.
Luffy: Hey Crocodile, you better get ready! THIS TIME I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR ASS!!!
Crocodile: I don't have time for this. Ms. All Sunday, grab the old man, we're leaving.
Robin: Right.
They grab Cobra and take off inside the royal tomb.