Hey guys, this is a story in development! I'm going to try and redo Age of Pirates in a different way!
I added way too many characters to the crew, and that got really hectic, so I decided to give it a new try, while making it different! Hope you g...
Back in Okobore Town, a bunch of thieves were robbing all the citizens.
Their leader stepped forward.
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Shuntenmaru (Leader of a group of thieves!)
Shuntenmaru: It's pointless for them to still have this much hope. There are no heroes out there who will-
He brought out his sword and blocked an attack from-
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Jack (One of the Generals of the Beast Pirates (Or All Stars)! He ate the Elephant Elephant Fruit, Ancient Zoan Model: Mammoth! Has the same voice actor as a certain psychotic mafia member who creates molds!)
Jack: Shuntenmaru!
Shuntenmaru: JACK?!
The two started clashing with each other.
Jack: Where are the Straw Hats?!
Shuntenmaru: And if I don't talk?
Jack: You'll die!
Shuntenmaru: Like I'd join up with a piece of shit like you!
Jack: WHAT DID YOU J-
???: JACK!
Jack: Huh?
He noticed Kaido behind him.
But he looked different!
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Jack: L-Lord Kaido!
Kaido: WHERE'S STRAW HAT AND HIS CREW?!
Jack: I suppose they must be in the ruins of Oden's Castle.
Kaido: Of course. WORORORORORORORORORO! BOLO BREATH!!!
He unleashed a powerful breath attack and it began to blow up the ruins of the castle, but-
Luffy was seen flying towards him in Snakeman form!
Luffy: Kaido!!!!
Jackson and (Y/N): LUFFY NO!!!
Luffy goes to punch Kaido, and he goes flying back!
Jack: LORD KAIDO!!!
Luffy: I'LL TAKE YOU OUT!
Kaido turned back into his normal form, and-
Kaido: Stupid brat! I have no time for a kid who's just playing pirate! AAAAAGH!! THUNDER BAGURA!!!
With one hit from his mace club, Luffy is knocked out!
(Y/N) and Jackson: LUFFY!!!!
You both rush in, but-
Jack appears!
(Y/N): AGH!
Law: SHAMBLES!!
Law teleports you guys out.
Law: Sorry, but we have to come back for him later.
(Y/N): But-
You and Jackson were weeping hard, as Luffy was soon carried off.
All the other Straw Hats were fine thanks to Law.
Soon...
Luffy found himself chained up.
Luffy: Damn you Kaido! I'll get you back for this! I-
???: STRAW HAT?!
Luffy: Huh?
He saw Kid in a cell across from him.
Luffy: JAGGY?
Kid: MY NAME IS KID YOU MORON!!!
TO BE CONTINUED....
(Y/N): LUFFY!! KAIDO IS GOING TO PAY FOR THIS! And it looks like he's been arrested! Hell, both Marine Groups hear about this! And it turns out that Moria is alive and well, ever since he as almost eliminated by Doflamingo! Though it seems Blackbeard and his crew have plans for him! Orochi is even having a banquet, though it looks like Robin, Levy, Juvia, Hancock, Mirajane, Lisanna, and Vivi have other plans there.
Luffy: Next Time: Banquet at Orochi's!/Act 2 Begins! I'M GOING TO BE KING OF THE PIRATES!!!
