SOAR - More Like Us

CHAPTER 3

SNOW

I LAUNCHED MYSELF AT Aaron, when I was met with a left hook to my face, as I swept across the grassy, gravel.
"You haven't changed one bit" a man in a uniform, walked up to me.
"Who are you?" I snarled, holding my right cheek. He looked me up and down, not taking off his smile. His balding head, shining in the setting sunlight. He sighed, and shook his head pitifully.
"Meet your maker!" He shouted, smirking. "Name's Derek. And wow, you look just like you used to,When you were yea high." He lifted one hand and lowered another, on top of each other measuring how big I was. John jumped off the tree, speeding his way over here followed by patrick behind him. Stroking his wings, John stretched his leg out, so that his foot would meet Derek's face. Instead, a guard smashed him to the ground, his jaw pushing sideways, causing it to dislocate. Patrick corkscrewed over the guard silently, blending in with the as he snuck behind a guard and whispered into his ear and he fell.
Hold on.
Pat snuck behind another guard, then got elbowed in the stomach, and smashed on the head, his eyes shutting, as he collapsed to the ground.
"Pat!" I yelled towards him, releasing the guards grip, pointing upwards. The sound of gunshots shattered my eardrums, but I knew well enough that I was too far to be hit. I glanced down at the pack, bruised, bloody, and slack-jawed. I flew for hours to clear my head, staring at the wide deep, ocean.
This isn't really happening.
I thought to myself. After flying for a while, I perched on a rocky cliff, watching the roaring water smashing against the rocks and splashing onto my shirt and jeans. I held my head in my hands. I scanned the area. Nothing but hills and rocks and ocean. As I did, I noticed something out of the corner of my eye, flying. I whipped my head up in hope.
They must've made it.
I looked closer. No. That's not them. There was five giant figures with wings and faces, flew through the air. I jumped off the cliff, my wings catching the air clumsily. I began to follow them and noticed, they have voices. And wings. That Derek, idiot better have a good explanation for all this.

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