Trying to write my version of Sounoor as Mineil.
The story goes on from where it was stopped in the show "PATIALA BABES".
Those who are reading, please watch Patiala Babes on Sony LIV from episode number 257 to 349 and then read this story. It's an...
When they came back from the park.....They got shocked.....
Drunk Khatri was banging on their haveli door.....
Khatri: Aye Mini..... Bahar nikal..... Oye Neil.....Dar gaye kya dono..... Meri hi biwi ko mere khilaaf kar diya hai tune Mini.... Main tujhe chodunga nahi....
Neil took steps towards him angrily, but Mini stopped him.
Mini: Neil! Ruko.
Neil: Abhi bhi tum mujhe rok rahi ho Mini! Kyu?
Mini: Kyunki khatri ne mujhe target kiya tha.... To usko jawab bhi main hi dungi.
Neil stopped for Mini.
Mini was hell angry at Khatri because of what all happened in the court.
She held Khatri's collar and took him outside on the street.
Neil knew that Mini had a lot of suppressed anger and emotions she has been tolerating from so long. He also knew that she should release those emotions to feel lighter and happier. So he just watched her punishing Khatri and beating the shit out of him.
Mini: (In most violent mode) Bahot muh khol raha tha na tu court me......Jyada pata hai na tereko ki kya kya chal raha hai kiske saath kaha pe.....aur tu bilkul doodh ka dhula hai to zara jawab bhi leta ja.....(Mini made him black and blue).....Tujhe to aaj me sab samajha hi dungi bahot acche se....
Neil was just shocked seeing Mini in such rage beating khatri so badly.....
He realised that Khatri is in very bad condition and Mini is still not stopping.....So he interviened.
Neil: Mini!....Mini!.....Look stop......bahot ho gaya hai please.....are uski haalat to dekho.....(Mini was not stopping) ......You don't need to kill him yaar.....Just see his condition.
Neil just held her from the back and tried stopping her by holding her from back.......She was still angrily kicking him.......
Whole mohalla was there looking at them...but no one dared to come infront of Mini today...... Neil turned her towards him and said: (softly but firmly) Just relax Mini .
Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re
Mini hugged Neil and calmed herself down....and he ran his fingers over her head to make her relax. Pura mohalla unko dekh raha tha but who cares.
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After some time, Mini felt relaxed so they came back to haveli.
Neil got inside and brought a first aid kit.
Mini: Yeh kiske liye?....Khatri se itni humdardi....?
Neil: Tum na.... ab shant hi raho.... Mini madam.... Aaj ke liye itna violence bahot hai...
Mini was taken aback.
Mini: Matlab?
Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re
Neil pulled her and made her sit on the sofa and sat on the ground beside her...... Itni maar-pitayi ki wajah se Mini ko bhi kuch kharoche aa gayi thi on her hands and feet... She didn't even noticed but Neil did.
Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan Kehne lagega aaina Subhanallah...
Mini: Ointment ki zaroorat nahi hai... Aisehi thik ho jayega...
Neil: Shhh....
He was applying the ointment, Mini hissed in slight pain.
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah Aisa hua, Subhanallah..
Neil blowed on her injury and She felt relaxed.
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah Aisa hua
Neil applied ointment on each and every wound so lovingly and delicately that Mini felt as if her wounds are healing just because of his pure and pious lovely gaze.
She got lost in him as he applied the ointment. He looked up to see her lost in him. He smiled.
Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena Unki dori se taarifein bun lena (x2)
He kept his hand on her cheek and she realised she was staring at him for so long.
Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon Taareef meri hai khaamakha Tohfa hai tera meri adaa
Neil: Thank you Mini.... for your constant support... for your belief..... for your faith in me.. for everything...
Mini: Hmm...(With peace and serenity on her face)
Suddenly Mini got the idea to get back him to normal.
Mini: Chalo utho ab.... kuch khane ke liye banao..... bhook lagi hai mujhe.... get up fast....
Neil could not understand the sudden change but still got up as he was also hungry.
He cooked some food... they ate lunch together......
After eating,
Mini: Neil.....Me soch rahi thi ki......agar tum mujhe cooking sikha do to....
Neil: KYA?....Kya bola tumne....?
Mini: Tum mujhe cooking sikha do na plz...
Neil: Kya?
Mini: (somewhat louder) KYA TUM MUJHE COOKING SIKHAOGE NEIL OBEROI?
Neil: Spare me plz....
Mini: Tumme itna bhi patience nahi hai kya ? Itna bhi tolerate nahi kar sakte....
Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare Meri zubaan se tu zara, haaye re
Neil: (Staring straight in her eyes) Tolerate to main tumhe zindagi bhar kar sakta hu....
Mini: Me kaise maan lu?
Neil: Aazma ke dekh lo....
Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai Tujhko sunaaun main zara, haay re
Mini: Aur agar kabhi tumhe aisa laga ki you can't then? .....what if you leave?
Neil: Aisa ho hi nahi sakta.... agar maine tumko kho diya to me khud ko bhi kho dunga... Me to jee bhi nahi paunga... mar hi.... (Mini kept her hands on his mouth)
Mini: Shh... Aisa nahi bolte...
Neil: Hmm... Sorry...
Ye do dilon ka waasta waasta Khul ke bataaya jaaye naa Subhanallah...
Mini: (trying to make him confess) Kyu jee nahi paoge mere bina...?
Neil did not say anything but Mini knew the answer this time.... so She smiled wholeheartedly....
Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah Aisa hua.. Subhanallah (x3)
Neil was surprised as he couldn't see the disappointment in her eyes which was visible every time jab vo apni man ki baat kehne ka mauka hote hue bhi ruk gaya tha.
But he was happy seeing her happy.
Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah Aisa hua..
Mini: To aaj ke dinner se shuru karein?
Neil: Kya?
Mini: Cooking?
Neil made faces....but could not win from Mini so agreed.
